About NanoAmerico^

I post a Twitter Friendly NanoAmerico^ on this page whenever I can. A NanoAmerico^ is an Allen Ginsberg style American Sentence, sandwiched between two shorter Iota sentences. The trick is to make it fit into 140 characters or less.

Sunday 31 January 2010

Posted to The American Sandwich game..
and at Monday Poetry Train Revisited.
My American Sentence :
Dave told me he could see for forty miles, thought Dawn, how far is the sun?

Here's my NanoAmerico^

In the mist she could barely see the hills.
Dave told me he could see for forty miles, thought Dawn, how far is the sun?
Nearer than Australia?
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4 comments:

  1. Stan SkiMonday, 01 February, 2010

    Australia's closer for me.

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  2. AnonymousMonday, 01 February, 2010

    Australia is pretty warm right now, right? I like the use of the name "Dawn" paired with the sun. This is very clever. Thanks for sharing it.

    Yousei Hime

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  3. Julie Jordan ScottMonday, 01 February, 2010

    Love the questioning element here. Great, childlike open energy. I think this week I will try the American Sandwich game. Always looking for new places to play.

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  4. Wendy NaisaMonday, 01 February, 2010

    Thanks Yousei, I think it kind of 'dawned' on me, as I was writing it.

    Hi Julie, we'd love to have you share something at The American Sandwich game..

    Thanks Stan, it's snowing here!

    aka Andy Sewina

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